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Published: Apr 18, 2013

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Literature Text

^{i take the time to
watch you breathe while waiting
for my soul to leave.}

day 1 of napowrimo

ok, i know i am waaaay behind on submissions... but i'll post my entries as soon as i can...

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imaginative-lioness

I normally don't like reading a haiku that rhymes, but this piece is truly beautiful and the rhyme just adds so much more to it